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I think this is one of my best original songs yet. would love your feedback as I'm continuing to grow! lyrics here:

Love is cruel
Love is kind
Love is patient, love is blind
Oh boy just come and get it

I’ll lead you through the fire
I’ll feed you with desire
but don’t step up ill end it

He’s sitting on the beach in Thailand
I’m sitting with my head in my hands
Back to the summer
I begged to show me a plan
But a boy oh he’s never gonna lead
So I kicked him to the curb
to set me free, oh

I feel like
We’re falling apart
‘Ever you call oh
It’s breaking my heart
Even one more night
You’re a waste of my time
Stop knocking at my door, oh
You say that
You miss me to death
I ain’t dyin, stop wasting your breath
Baby you’re one of a dozen
who wanna be my lover
I don’t want no no more
of your poison

He’s gone, im so light
I’m sleeping at night
But he visits me in every dream

He says, “I’m too young!”
I say, “so we’re done” 🙄
I’m looking down he’s on his knees, oh

Once upon a time a boy he thought he was a man
So I broke my own heart to save him baby
Cause he knows that I’m gonna up and leave
So he better thank me
I set him free oh

I feel like
We’re falling apart
‘Ever you call oh
It’s breaking my heart
Even one more night
You’re a waste of my time
Stop knocking at my door, oh
You say that
You miss me to death
I ain’t dyin, stop wasting your breath
Baby you’re one of a dozen
who wanna be my lover
I don’t want no no more
of your poison

January to July
He’s in love he’s in denial
Well boys they
Just wanna have fun
Five years you’ve had your time
Let me help make up your mind
Get off the pot
Cause boy you’re done
You don’t deserve who I am and who I’ll be
gonna find another man
Who satisfies my needs!

I feel like
We’re falling apart
‘Ever you call oh
You’re breaking my heart
Even one more night
You’re a waste of my time
Stop knocking at my door, oh
You say that
You miss me to death
Well I’m dyin, cause you ain’t leaving yet
Baby you’re one of a dozen
who wanna be my lover
I don’t want no no more (x3)
of your poison