C1 Advanced (CAE) PERFECT C1 Advanced essay example! | Writing Workshop

I was asked to correct this C1 Advanced (CAE) essay, but it's already perfect... I had very few things to change to this essay, making it a perfect example of a C1 Advanced Essay. Learn how to write a C1 Advanced essay by studying this example!

What would you change to this essay?

Chapters
00:00 Introduction
00:13 Assignment
01:09 First glance at the essay
01:42 Perfecting the introduction
03:38 Perfecting Argument 1
08:38 Argument 2
14:04 Opinion and Conclusion
15:27 What makes this essay perfect?!
15:48 End

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