Скачать или смотреть How to write plain language 29: Be positive - not negative!

This week, we're looking at how you can keep your message positive (in terms of structure) and avoid the tendency to draft everything in such a negative way! Watch the video for more details, and please check out the link below. See you on Friday with my comments!

• Joe Fore’s article from Virginia Lawyer – p62 (cont. on p61): http://virginialawyer.vsb.org/publica...

Tasks:
1) Redraft the sentence to create positive structures.
2) Use tabulation to create an easier structure.

TEXT TO REDRAFT:
No rate agreement shall qualify under section 2(a) unless not fewer than thirty days notice is given to all customers; and unless said rate agreement has been published, as provided above, provided, however, that the publication requirement shall not apply to emergency rates; and until said rate agreement has been approved by the Commission.

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