Editing my viewers' first pages! (August 2024 Editon)

Viewers sent in the first page of their books...if they dared! And you guys did dare. You're very brave! I discuss overall thoughts on where these pages succeed and where I think they could be stronger, and suggestions for tightening & improving prose.

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I recommend starting with a book set in my main fantasy world:
The Sorcerer's Concubine: http://books2read.com/u/4EKz8z
Doll Girl Meets Dead Guy: http://books2read.com/u/bPNRBr
The Broken Queen: https://www.amazon.com/Broken-Queen-C...

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