My Cambridge MPhil (Masters) Personal Statement + TIPS! | Ep.3 Oxbridge Application Series

00:00 Intro
01:07 How to brainstorm
04:13 Reading my PS - Intro
08:25 Reading my PS - Body
12:31 Reading my PS - Closing
14:19 Career goals
15:26 My first draft (and what you can learn from it)
18:40 The mini essays
20:19 Final advice
21:45 Outro

Welcome to the THIRD episode of my Oxbridge Application Series! 📌 In this episode, I shared my Cambridge personal statement alongside the previous versions and what I've learned throughout writing it!

📩 If you're looking for someone to review your essay, I do offer a personal statement/statement of purpose/or any university admission essay review service (paid). Drop me an email (see below) if you are interested.
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About the series:
In this series, I will be talking about the process of applying to Oxford/Cambridge or other UK universities. From preparing yourself to researching your course, writing a personal statement, getting your recommendation letter and dealing with (*touchwood*) rejections. I named it Oxbridge in specific because I only applied to those universities for my Master, but these tips and advice are generally applicable to most UK universities!

I recently got accepted into an MPhil programme at the University of Cambridge and I thought, given that I had gone through the process of applying, there are tips, lessons learnt, and perspectives that I wanted to share with future applicants! Plus, when I first started applying, there wasn’t a consolidated resource dedicated to sharing "insider tips" about applying to Oxbridge especially for international students, and I hope that this series will be helpful for people! :)
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// related videos
🎥 Oxbridge Application Playlist |    • 🎓 Oxbridge App. Series  
🎥Cambridge Acceptance Reaction |    • I'M DOING MY MASTERS AT CAMBRIDGE *em...  
🎥How I Got Into Cambridge in Bahasa Indonesia |    • DITERIMA MASTER DI CAMBRIDGE... CARAN...  
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// sources
• Journaling    • Journaling: How to Write Stream of Co...  
• Personal statement videos from other YouTubers which I found very helpful!
   • the personal statement that GOT ME IN...  
   • Видео  
   • Write a Killer Personal Statement - M...  
   • How to write a KILLER personal statem...   (from Jesus College, Oxford Uni)
• My course https://www.devstudies.cam.ac.uk/stud...
• Collegial system (cambridge) https://www.cam.ac.uk/about-the-unive...
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// socials
@viancqa (  / viancqa  )
@abroadening.id (  / abroadening.id   - this is an initiative for Indonesian students that I co-founded! If you're planning to study abroad, I recommend that you check it out)
[email protected]
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⚠️ *Before you email me with questions about admissions to UK university, try going on Google or the university website to find the answers - most of the information is actually readily available online. I'm always happy to help but you have to do your own research, it's the most important step for anyone interested in studying overseas!
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// frequently asked questions
• Where are you from? I'm born and raised in Indonesia 🇮🇩 but have moved to the UK 🇬🇧 since 2017 to pursue my higher education!
• Where did you do your undergrad? Coventry University https://bit.ly/3i5D3IB
• How did you enter a UK University without A-Level/IB/Foundation? https://bit.ly/2AwEoXY
• What is it like interning in the UK as an International student? https://bit.ly/3eHl74R
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// music
- Naomi - Osaka - https://thmatc.co/?l=114BB063
- Naomi - Polaroids - https://thmatc.co/?l=54FBFBF7

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