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This video teaches you how to write essays on the topic of science and innovation.
It includes the following:

1. 𝐊𝐞𝐲 𝐕𝐨𝐜𝐚𝐛𝐮𝐥𝐚𝐫𝐲:
2. 𝐎𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐈𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐫𝐭𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐞:
3. 𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐨𝐧 𝐀𝐫𝐠𝐮𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐬 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐃𝐞𝐛𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐬:
4. 𝐄𝐱𝐚𝐦𝐩𝐥𝐞𝐬 𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐂𝐮𝐫𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐭 𝐄𝐯𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐬:
5. 𝐌𝐨𝐝𝐞𝐥 𝐄𝐬𝐬𝐚𝐲:

𝐌𝐨𝐝𝐞𝐥 𝐄𝐬𝐬𝐚𝐲:
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Some people believe that technological advancements lead to a major loss of privacy.
Do you agree with this belief?
What can be done to protect people’s privacy?
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In today's digital era, new technologies are a double-edged sword, enhancing convenience and connectivity at the great expense of confidentiality. This essay discusses why I believe that technology truly undermines personal security and explores strategies to mitigate such privacy losses.


I believe private information is at risk for two main reasons. The most salient is the extensive data collection capabilities that technology enables. Digital platforms and services accumulate vast amounts of personal information, from user behaviours to precise locations, often without comprehensive user consent. Additionally, the storage of personal information in digital formats increases vulnerability to security breaches. These breaches can lead to substantial personal and financial harm, as seen in numerous high-profile cases where sensitive information was compromised.


Several strategies can be implemented to safeguard personal security. The most effective way is to implement stringent regulations globally, similar to the European Union’s General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR). Such laws would enforce transparency about information usage and grant individuals greater control over their own information. Alongside legislative action, technological solutions like robust encryption should be standard to protect information from unauthorised access. This will prevent negation parties from gathering data through unscrupulous behaviour.


In conclusion, personal security is being compromised due to issues with the collection and storage of information. By enacting strong privacy laws and enhancing technological security measures, society can enjoy the benefits of digital advancements without sacrificing fundamental privacy rights.

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