I tried to make music in Fl Studio Mobile

anyway i am open for your tips

self thought of a week..
this is just showing what i learn,if did i make a good or bad music, hm talking about music literally you can know what i listen and even the author that i had been a fan of.

Tips: this is my way of learning
experiment with notes takes notes how melody is made
start just learning rhythm and next music theory

by the way actually im not likely gonna change DAW in this months or year, if i change it mostly likely Garageband, if in PC welp just a PC version of FL Studio or Repear and Logic Pro...

credits:
the song - ‪@Bynirer‬ (me)
instruments - i do not own but i paid and most are extracted it to dwp
DAW: Fl Studio Mobile ( flm )

Genre mixed:
Artcore?, Electro House?, Trance, Hardcore, Drum n Bass, Dubstep,
and of course EDM or literally instrumental

all the square, screech, and supersaws was made by me anyway
after the drum downside so there is the preset i made except the amen break

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