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In Episode 22 of ""The Good, The Bad, and The Poorly Written,"" I tackle two of the weakest scenes yet (Sc. 53 & 54) in my first feature script ""Crime at 6,200',"" where ski-bum detective Sam finally investigates suspect Brent in South Lake Tahoe. Whether you’re an aspiring screenwriter, a film student, or a behind-the-scenes fan, this video will show you how I salvage a single key reveal, connecting Brent to the pinky-ring supplier. While scrapping boring shoe-leather, repetitive surveillance, and conflict-free phone calls. Watch me rewrite flat, consequence-free moments into a tense new confrontation scene loaded with drama, class tension, and suspicion, proving even the worst original scenes can become a springboard for something sharper and more cinematic!

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