How I Edit My Fantasy Books (2023)

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In this video, I share my exact step-by-step system for editing fantasy novels. If you've wondered how to turn your fantasy book from a messy first draft into a polished story, this video is for you.

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⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:

00:00 - Introduction
1:09 – Let it sit
2:02 – Read the entire thing
4:24 – Figure out what its about
6:06 – Big removals and rewrites
12:16 – Big picture edits 
13:44 – Fix placeholders
14:35 – Get feedback
21:19 – Specific passes
25:56 – Get an editor
26:37 – Proof reading

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Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.

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