Falter! I Will Not Fail....Demo

hey y'all! its Captain Vinno. what's this - you may be wondering? well this is a demo to a song that I want to one day make into a real thing. the reason I'm posting this is so I can easily show it to people that i know and play it regularly. it's been made using Suno AI and one day I will make an even better version of it with a band.
at 3:52 there is an awkward flow issue because I can only go for 4 minutes and it ramped up at the very end but I liked the way it left off. hope y'all enjoy
Approximate lyrics:


[high pitched screams]
Faaaaalling!
I'm falling down a hole
Deeper and deeper
Til I'm not who I know
I'm lost at sea!
Far away from shore!


I'm at the brink of self destruction
Lost in the shadows
It all fades to black
I reach for light
But it slips through my hand
Trapped in the night
Will I make it out alive?

I'm at the brink of self destruction
Lost in the shadows
It all fades to black
I reach for light
But it slips through my hand
Trapped in the night
Will I make it out alive?

]
Here I stand
I know that this fight
Is long from over
But I will stay true
I will not give up
Woah no!
I will not!
Oh I will not!
[Scream]
I will not fail!



Thoughts echo in the hollow dark
Fear gripping tight
It's leaving its mark
But I must rise
Through the stormy tide
Hope starts to glimmer
In the place where I hide
I will have my retribution


Hands are reaching
From the depths below
Pulling me closer
Into the undertow
But I see the light
Breaking through the clouds
A promise to fight
These demons inside!
The tide is turning
With the fire inside burning!

Here I stand
I know that this fight
Is long from over
But I will stay true
I will not give up
Woah no!
I will not!
Oh I will not!
[Low pitched scream]
I will not falter!
I will not falter!
I will nooooooootttt!!!!!!

(speech)
I've been walking this journey for so fucking long my feet hurt. I've been saying the same shit for years.
But i have to ask myself, when the fuck are you going to take this seriously. This is my life and I want to live it how I want to live. I'm tired of this self inflicted pain and insecurity! Sincerely, someone trying to survive this road to hell

Woah no!
I will not!
Oh I will not!
I will not fail!
I will not falter
Here I stand
I know that this fight
Is long from over
But I will stay true
I will not give up
Woah no!
I will not!
Oh I will not!
I will not falter! (Falter)

I stand before two roads
To my left,
I change nothing and suffer
This endless heartache
To my right,
I change for me
And life deepens
In streaks of gold
And change this world
For the greater good
I choose the right!!!!!


I will not fail! (fail!)
I will not falter no! (Woah no!)
For this has (for this has)
For this has(for this has)
Gone on
Gone on too (gone on)
Long (long)