How Power of Three Failed – Sunny's Spiel | Warriors Analysis

I do still love this arc to pieces. But it has some major problems, hence the need for a rewrite. I am still interested in hearing your thoughts, and this isn’t at all intended to attack Warriors or the team behind it. I love the books, and read every new one that comes out.

I should say as an afterword for anyone who’s interested that since my rewrite is for both PoT (Power of Three) and OotS (Omen of the Stars), I don’t remove every problem I discussed in this video. The powers for instance, aren’t important in PoT so the logical solution to make a rewrite of PoT might be to remove the powers entirely and make a slice of life story. But because I need to lead into OotS, I instead try to make the powers important in PoT. And the pacing is sped up significantly to allow for more plot. I do still hope to keep the spark of life in the clans and the stories in the background that draw me back to PoT to this day, but only time will tell if I succeed in that.

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