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Join us LIVE on ZOOM this December 7, Sunday as we review manga oneshot “Kickstart” by Artsy Amani.

📖 Read her manga here: https://tapas.io/series/kickstart_

We’ll break down the story, paneling, pacing, and page flow — and show how small fixes can make a huge difference in your manga.

Whether you’re working on your first oneshot or planning a bigger series, this live critique will help you learn how to:
Plan stories more effectively
Avoid common beginner mistakes
Improve clarity, pacing, and emotional impact

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🗓️ December 7, Sunday – 8AM CST | 11PM Japan Time

👉 Wanna learn how to create your oneshot manga and pitch to publishers in Japan? Book a FREE Manga Consultation Call: https://bit.ly/KickstartYourManga


00:02:34 The Professional Manga Creation Process
00:05:21 Why Lila made her oneshot manga “Kickstart!”
00:08:24 Pitching her manga to Viz Media
00:11:15 Why you should NOT start with making a series as a beginner manga artist
00:12:20 Viz Media’s feedback on her manga
00:15:08 How beginner manga artists can shorten their story for a oneshot manga
00:16:55 Lila’s planning stage for her oneshot
00:19:16 KiShoTenKetsu, the story structure of every manga
00:24:06 The logline or one sentence pitch for “Kickstart!”
00:26:15 Analyzing “Kickstart!” Page by page
00:29:26 Feedback - Too much info-dumping
00:31:21 Feedback - Wrong character to focus on
00:32:45 The use of “Ma” panels
00:33:26 Feedback - Neglecting the actual protagonist
00:34:55 The objective and purpose of every oneshot manga
00:37:15 Common beginner mistakes
00:38:40 Feedback - no character flaws and no stakes
00:43:57 Feedback - no story twist and poor impact
00:45:12 Common practices for sports manga
00:50:52 Viewers’ feedback on “Kickstart!”
00:54:46 Biggest Feedback for improvement
00:56:17 How many characters for a oneshot manga
00:58:08 Feedback - rewriting conflict
00:59:23 Lila’s thoughts after feedback
1:13:47 Don’t make this mistake when pitching your story
1:15:33 “Is making a lot of oneshot manga really worth it?”