Скачать или смотреть 【Big Al】 Fr@cture 【VOCALOID Original Song】 + VSQ

Art/Video by MsConstantine
Song/lyrics by Msconstantine
Vocals by Powerfx Vocaloid Big Al

Ok, so this was my first real attempt at an original song. I was going for a techno-ish feel, as that's the genre I'm most comfortable starting out in. I tried to make a song that would fit Big Al's vocal range well, so I hope it turned out ok. I'm completely new and untrained to actual music, so this was kind of a shot in the dark for me. I really want to improve and keep making music, so please tell me what areas I can improve in. Also, as you may have noticed, I've disabled the thumbs up and thumbs down on this because I really, really want feedback. If you hate it, please at least leave a comment to tell me why, and what I can do to fix it in the future. I really appreciate all constructive criticism, and I value your opinions, so please let me know what you think. Anyways, I hope you enjoy this! It really took a lot of work!

Nico:http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm14730534

here's the MP3 if you want it:
http://www.4shared.com/audio/UHpz6DSv...

VSQ:
http://www.4shared.com/file/wNnvYuid/...
please post your version as a video response so that I can see it :D