How I'm Line Editing my YA Fantasy Novel // Line Edit With Me

This is how I'm line editing my YA fantasy novel Project Shadows. This is the first time I'm sharing any of my writing publicly and YEAH I'M DOING FINE WHY DO YOU ASK????

But for real, let me know if you would make any different choices on this passage, I'd love to hear any feedback!

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0:00 I've been line editing
1:52 The game plan
4:32 The line editing
27:53 Wrap up / an update

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