Mistakes TO AVOID when writing

Hello thank you for watching my video on storytelling pet peeves and things you should avoid when writing. This is generally writing advice, but as with many of these videos these are strictly my opinion and overall ponderings on the broad and difficult subject of writing.

Unfortunately, Pomni from Amazing Digital Circus is not here, but that's because it avoids a lot of the pet peeves in this video. Anyways, dear reader, thank you for coming to this description to read my completely unnecessary explanation of the title and thumbnail. This description is a bit of a reference to my channel and branding because I'm kinda funny like that. I'm sure you're probably wanting to get back to the video, but allow me to describe to you the detailed intricacies of my novel's power system. You see, in the beginning, there was nothing- or maybe it wasn't NOTHING, but it was basically nothing. Anyways, there were two gods or something which came from the nothing, and then those two gods started fighting. Also they were about creation and destruction and stuff. Obviously, we like the creation god, but not the destruction god. After this creation which is completely irrelevant to the power system as a whole, we come to see our main protagonist Gubbo the Goblin. This goblin isn't like other goblins, and they're actually a good person. You see, in the beginning-

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