The Long Night - Sevatar's Justice || Voice Over

Someone requested a Sevatar piece and I realised I hadn't considered broaching him yet, so, here is a Sevatar video!
There are more excerpts of him I'd like to attempt, so, if there are any critiques as to how to how to better handle him, please do bring them up!
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https://www.fiverr.com/share/Z44BeQ
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𝗘𝗾𝘂𝗶𝗽𝗺𝗲𝗻𝘁:
Mic: CAD E100S condenser Microphone
Arm: Rode Mic Arm
Audio: Reaper Studio
Video: Sony Vegas
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All respective works belong to their creators. My voice and my time are my only additions.
Warhammer 40k belongs to Games Workshop
The Long Night is by Aaron Dembski-Bowden
Artwork:   / 1384794343899344896  
Music:    • DARK AMBIENT//CINEMATIC//ATMOSPHERIC ...  
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Thank you for watching!