Curly Boy Tries The Curly Girl Method!

Well, I've given in. Over 7 requests for hair content has lead me here - trying the CURLY GIRL METHOD!
Thoughts? What did I did good or bad?

Music - DW Smith https://dwsmithbeats.bandcamp.com/
Font - https://www.dafont.com/pw-hairz.font
Fun Graphics - https://www.etsy.com/uk/listing/12298...

CGM Products -
Cleanse - https://www.amazon.co.uk/Olaplex-No-4...
Conditioner - https://www.lookfantastic.com/curlsmi...
Comb - https://curldo.com/products/curl-deta...
Style - https://www.amazon.co.uk/Cantu-Grapes...

Old Products -
https://uk.davines.com/products/love-...
https://www.cultbeauty.co.uk/christop...
https://www.amazon.co.uk/milk_shake-A...
https://www.philipkingsley.co.uk/prod...