💌 so, i let my friends read my book… here’s what they said // writing vlog

major shout out to Sam, ‪@KrisMF‬, & ‪@kelleyiswriting‬ for this one

➵ "Project Moths"
BABEL x STARLING HOUSE
An ambitious young alchemist studying at the prestigious Université Meurdrac comes face-to-face with her past after the school's immortal headmistress is murdered.

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hello! in this slightly different installment of the project moths writing vlog series, i sent the first two acts of my unfinished book to three friends... here are their responses.

i'd love to go a little deeper into how i approach feedback and apply it during the revisions stage, so let me know if that'd be interesting to you!

thank you for watching :)

✨ timestamps:
0:00 - opening
0:03 - intro, what we're doing
0:50 - catching you up
4:39 - a chaotic phone call to discuss the book
5:22 - reading kris' feedback for the first time
15:13 - back to writing
15:24 - tuesday update
19:54 - sunset montage
20:09 - outro

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✨ my published writing:
"The Fall of Esther Park" via Apparition Lit: https://apparitionlit.com/the-fall-of...
"Eulogy for a Muse" via The Icarus Writing Collective: https://www.icaruswritingcollective.c...

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