I got beta reader feedback and now I have a lot of things to fix 🥲 gothic fantasy writing vlog

TLDR; sometimes eating a burrito solves a lot of problems!

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Resources that made me a better writer:    • resources that made me a better write...  
Lady Macbeth Reading Vlog    • reading my most anticipated fantasy o...  

“On Female Rage” by Leslie Jamison, narrated by Julia Whelan https://www.nytimes.com/2020/08/02/po...
Uses of Anger by Audre Lorde (essay) https://blogs.ubc.ca/hopeprinceengl47...
Hymn for the Black Terrific by Kiki Petrosino (review) https://www.muzzlemagazine.com/kiki-p...

timestamps:
0:00 intro
0:21 project history
1:08 beta feedback + work to be done
3:41 revision planning
9:46 distracting(?) ideas
12:12 Mr. Kitty check in
12:24 finding character voice + arc
14:00 completed revision plan + beat sheets

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& Jokabi:
https://www.instagram.com/jokabi.beat...