How to Write Your College Supplemental Essays: 5 Mistakes to Avoid, with Dartmouth Example

You’ve heard that the Personal Statement essay can make or break your college applications. But what if I told you that knowing how to write strong college supplemental essays is just as important?

Supplemental essays are your chance to show colleges who you really are: your personality, your interests, and what makes you uniquely you.

Unfortunately, there are 5 common mistakes that applicants commit every year. Watch this video to find out how to avoid these 5 mistakes, and how to strategically level-up your supplemental essays for any college application.

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TIMESTAMPS:
- Introduction - [00:00 - 00:16]
- Mistake #1: Failing to clearly articulate your goals - [00:18 - 01:13]
- Mistake #2: Telling instead of showing - [01:15 - 01:58]
- Mistake #3: Using overly formal language - [02:00 - 02:33]
- Mistake #4: Failing to demonstrate fit - [02:34 - 03:41]
- Mistake #5: Failing to show growth - [03:42 - 04:18]
- 2023-24 Dartmouth essay prompt - [04:19 - 04:59]
- Weak Essay Example (Dartmouth) - [04:59 - 08:40]
- Strong Essay Example (Dartmouth) - [08:41 - 12:07]
- Final Thoughts - [12:08 - 13:39]

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