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Timeline:
0:00 Intro
0:22 The Danger of Bad Syntax
2:31 All Out of Proportion
4:26 Overdosing on Prepositional Phrases
6:06 Hit the Right Tempo with Story Beats
7:55 Specificity, Either More or Less
10:35 Sloppy vs. Beautiful Repetition
12:26 Unnecessary Body Language
13:53 Pare it Down