how to review your own personal statement for top university admissions!

Here are a few things you can check in your current personal statement draft! I draw these from my experience reviewing 50+ of your essays in the past 2-2.5 years, some of them getting offers from Cambridge, Oxford, Imperial, UIUC, NYU, Toronto, and many more.

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🌱 Timestamps
0:00 Intro
1:17 Quick shoutout!
1:52 Knowing what to write
4:13 Reflection and nuances
6:28 Personalisation and depth of research
10:40 FINAL ADVICE!

🌱 Resources
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🌱 Say hi on my socials
╰ Instagram, my essay review service @letvihelpyou (  / letvihelpyou  )
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🌱 A bit about me
Hellu peeps, I’m Viancqa - an Indonesian working in Singapore, who previously studied in the UK for 5 years at Cambridge and Coventry. Here, I share my slice-of-life takes, talking openly about my mistakes, learnings and growth, finding ways to navigate my early 20s, and just how to be a slightly better person each day. If I find something interesting in my life, I also like to vlog it!

🌱 If you're applying to study abroad
I have helped 30+ students gain admissions to top universities globally, the likes of Cambridge, Oxford, Imperial, Edinburgh, UIUC, Toronto, and more. I mainly work with students on finding their narratives for personal statements and help them in their storytelling. For more information on this paid service, drop me an email or DM @letvihelpyou

🌱 Music
╰ Naomi - Polaroids - https://thmatc.co/?l=54FBFBF7